Okay, pt.2 to my last post. Here's the next 6 pages.
I really like how this one is coming along, for a first effort. Of course there's plenty of work to do to clean it up, finishing the first draft notwithstanding. I'm hoping that I should have the whole first draft done (and up!) in about a week or so. Wish me luck, it all has to fall into my (nonexistant) spare time.